[epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release

Wed Feb 22 15:50:47 GMT 2012

Excellent; thanks for the feedback! I put the final version in the Dropbox
folder (EPSI conference press release_FINAL), and that should be OK for
distribution now. Ton and Daniel, can you go ahead with that? Thanks!

Hans

2012/2/22 Marc de Vries <info at devriesmarc.nl>

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> *Van:* Marc de Vries [mailto:info at devriesmarc.nl]
> *Verzonden:* woensdag 22 februari 2012 15:31
> *Aan:* 'epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org'
> *Onderwerp:* RE: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release****
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> Hi Hans,****
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> Thanks for this.****
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> I made some last small changes, marked in blue.****
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> To me it looks very nice now and if there are no other suggestions, I
> think we should distribute it asap.****
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> Hans, can you then pass the final version on to Ton and Daniel, so they
> can distribute it under their press contacts?****
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> Reg. M.****
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> *Van:* epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org [mailto:
> epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] *Namens *Hans Graux
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> *Verzonden:* woensdag 22 februari 2012 14:59
> *Aan:* epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> *Onderwerp:* Re: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release****
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> Further to Marc’s comments, I updated the press release to: ****
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> ·         Make the language a bit more exciting;****
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> ·         Insert direct contact details for Ton; I didn’t add separate
> contact info for DE (Daniel) and FR (me), since my FR is not really up to
> clean marketing standards, and it might otherwise look a little disjointed.
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> ·          Add a line to credit and thank our sponsors (as taken from the
> current conference support document in the Dropbox). ****
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> You’ll find the new version in attachment and in the Dropbox under
> marketing. If that’s OK to everyone, I suggest to go ahead with
> distribution. ****
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> BR,****
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> Hans****
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> *Van:* epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org [mailto:
> epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] *Namens *Marc de Vries
> *Verzonden:* maandag 20 februari 2012 13:53
> *Aan:* epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> *Onderwerp:* Re: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release****
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> Hi Hans,****
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> Thanks for this draft.****
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> I think it looks good.****
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> Some suggestions:****
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> 1.       As it is aimed at journalists, always looking for some
> excitement, I would put a bit more ‘expectations’ in the text, like: this
> will be the landmark event, you should be there etc., illustrated by the
> big dilemma’s of the moment: how to have impact, how to make this work, how
> to make sure governments connect and stay connected etc.****
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> 2.       I would also put in the contact details of Ton, so that any
> responses can be covered by him (if Daniel wants to cover German speaking
> countries and you French speaking countries that is fine, but it may be
> wise to have one central person).****
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> 3.       Possibly you can also add some words on our sponsors.****
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> To be discussed and finalized at our CC. If others have comments, please
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> Also we need to agree then on the distribution (timing, logistics etc.).**
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> Reg. M.****
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> *Van:* epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org [mailto:
> epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] *Namens *Hans Graux
> *Verzonden:* donderdag 16 februari 2012 12:58
> *Aan:* epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> *Onderwerp:* [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release****
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> Hi all,****
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> As discussed during Monday’s call, I’ve tried to come up with a draft
> press release for the conference, to be sent out to potentially interested
> publications. As you’ll see, it’s largely based on the existing promotional
> materials, but my two main goals were to keep it short (one page max) and
> to make it understandable to anyone with even the slightest interest in the
> topic (so no jargon or references to legal texts). Could you take a look at
> see if this is appealing enough for press purposes? Your comments would be
> very welcome. I also put it in the dropbox under the marketing-folder for
> the conference. ****
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> BR,****
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> Hans****
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