[epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release

Wed Feb 22 16:20:32 GMT 2012

No problem; I've put a pdf with working links in the Dropbox.

BR,

Hans

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Van: epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org
[mailto:epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] Namens Daniel Dietrich
Verzonden: woensdag 22 februari 2012 17:18
Aan: epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
Onderwerp: Re: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release

Could you please create a PDF version with klickable links.

For some strange reasons the links do not work if I safe as PDF.

Thanks
Daniel

On 22.02.2012, at 16:50, Hans Graux wrote:

> Excellent; thanks for the feedback! I put the final version in the
Dropbox folder (EPSI conference press release_FINAL), and that should be
OK for distribution now. Ton and Daniel, can you go ahead with that?
Thanks!
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> Hans
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> 2012/2/22 Marc de Vries <info at devriesmarc.nl>
> Right...
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> Van: Marc de Vries [mailto:info at devriesmarc.nl]
> Verzonden: woensdag 22 februari 2012 15:31
> Aan: 'epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org'
> Onderwerp: RE: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release
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> Hi Hans,
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> Thanks for this.
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> I made some last small changes, marked in blue.
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> To me it looks very nice now and if there are no other suggestions, I
think we should distribute it asap.
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> Hans, can you then pass the final version on to Ton and Daniel, so they
can distribute it under their press contacts?
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> Reg. M.
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> Van: epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org
[mailto:epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] Namens Hans Graux
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> Verzonden: woensdag 22 februari 2012 14:59
> Aan: epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> Onderwerp: Re: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release
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> Dear all,
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> Further to Marc's comments, I updated the press release to:
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> .         Make the language a bit more exciting;
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> .         Insert direct contact details for Ton; I didn't add separate
contact info for DE (Daniel) and FR (me), since my FR is not really up to
clean marketing standards, and it might otherwise look a little
disjointed.
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> .          Add a line to credit and thank our sponsors (as taken from
the current conference support document in the Dropbox).
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> You'll find the new version in attachment and in the Dropbox under
marketing. If that's OK to everyone, I suggest to go ahead with
distribution.
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> BR,
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> Hans
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> Van: epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org
[mailto:epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] Namens Marc de Vries
> Verzonden: maandag 20 februari 2012 13:53
> Aan: epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> Onderwerp: Re: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release
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> Hi Hans,
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> Thanks for this draft.
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> I think it looks good.
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> Some suggestions:
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> 1.       As it is aimed at journalists, always looking for some
excitement, I would put a bit more 'expectations' in the text, like: this
will be the landmark event, you should be there etc., illustrated by the
big dilemma's of the moment: how to have impact, how to make this work,
how to make sure governments connect and stay connected etc.
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> 2.       I would also put in the contact details of Ton, so that any
responses can be covered by him (if Daniel wants to cover German speaking
countries and you French speaking countries that is fine, but it may be
wise to have one central person).
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> 3.       Possibly you can also add some words on our sponsors.
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> To be discussed and finalized at our CC. If others have comments, please
prepare them.
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> Also we need to agree then on the distribution (timing, logistics etc.).
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> Reg. M.
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> Van: epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org
[mailto:epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] Namens Hans Graux
> Verzonden: donderdag 16 februari 2012 12:58
> Aan: epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> Onderwerp: [epsi-coord] ePSI conference press release
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> Hi all,
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> As discussed during Monday's call, I've tried to come up with a draft
press release for the conference, to be sent out to potentially interested
publications. As you'll see, it's largely based on the existing
promotional materials, but my two main goals were to keep it short (one
page max) and to make it understandable to anyone with even the slightest
interest in the topic (so no jargon or references to legal texts). Could
you take a look at see if this is appealing enough for press purposes?
Your comments would be very welcome. I also put it in the dropbox under
the marketing-folder for the conference.
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> BR,
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> Hans
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