[epsi-coord] Fwd: finale versie van de tekst

[Tom Kronenburg]

I'd have to say, I like the imagery.

What I miss though, is a bit of context.

 *   What is the manifesto?
 *   For whom, by whom?
 *   What's our clear message? I like the first part of the 'storyline', but I don't know what is meant by backwards/forwards? Also, point 5, what is it about?

I think there should be a bit more text in the final poster. This text is really what the manifesto is about, so I'd say that in some way or another, the (abridged or full) text of the manifesto should be incorporated.

Tom
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Onderwerp: [epsi-coord] Fwd: finale versie van de tekst

ar all,

I would appreciate your comments on the first drafts of the visualisation of the Helsinki Manifesto, preferably by tonight.

Please be as specific as possible, taking account of the accompanying email of the visualizer below.

@ton, what size and format are we looking for?

Reg. Marc
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