[epsi-coord] Updated Technical report

Wed Nov 30 07:29:37 GMT 2011

Thanks Hans,

adopted your suggestions in the final document.

best,
Ton
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On Tue, Nov 29, 2011 at 3:48 PM, Hans Graux <hans.graux at timelex.eu> wrote:

> Hi Ton,
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> I took a quick look, and have only a few small comments:
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> ·         On page 4 (progress table), the third column (Target for 01 Nov
> 2011) should ideally be made a little wider, or alternatively the font in
> the table should be made a little smaller; a word like ‘Calendar’ should be
> able to fit on one line.
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> ·         On page 5 (last line on the Legal case reviews), I’d drop the
> phrase ‘Will more closely also follow complaint procedures and take fresh
> looks at some existing cases’. I think it’s enough to just say ‘6
> additional cases lined up for production,
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> ·         bringing us on and above target again’, without specifying
> where we’ll go looking for those six cases in this table.
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> Other than those points, this looks like a good job to me!
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> Hans
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> *Van:* epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org [mailto:
> epsi-coord-bounces at lists.okfn.org] *Namens *Ton Zijlstra
> *Verzonden:* dinsdag 29 november 2011 14:30
> *Aan:* epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
> *Onderwerp:* [epsi-coord] Updated Technical report
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> Hi all,
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> I've adapted and edited the Technical Report in the way we discussed
> yesterday in the conference call. It's available as a PDF in our dropbox.
> Please have a look at it if you can this afternoon and send your last
> remarks to me. I want to send it to Juan tomorrow morning at the latest (as
> that is 30 november).
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> best,
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> Ton
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