[epsi-coord] Topic report [Ready for final comments]

Fri Jul 27 09:38:43 BST 2012

Hi Antti,

You are right. I promised feedback and will do later today.

All best
Daniel

On 27 Jul 2012, at 08:32, Antti Jogi Poikola wrote:

> Hi Tom and Daniel (+ others),
> 
> The city data topic report is finally ready. By ready at this moment I mean that "I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO GET IMPROVEMENT COMMENTS" from you guys. So far I didn't get much feedback and as this is my first topic report I really would hope for second opinions.
> 
> I will do the final proof-reading after your comments, but if the schedule is tight (I know that this is late already) I believe that the report can be sent already to the  ePSIplatform -contractor who will check the language (Tom could you handle this, I don't have the contact info).
> 
> Attached is the PDF -version, the word can be found from the:
> 
> Dropbox/Deliverables/Topic reports/work in progress (direct link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/m1s9yawi8bn150s/Topic_report_local_and_regional_data.doc?m )
> 
> One specific question on format... I checked from the earlier topic reports and it seemed that there was abstract two times, once before the table of contents and then again, is this the way it is supposed to be done?
> 
> 
> BR,
> 
> Antti Poikola
> 
> On 23 July 2012 19:36, Daniel Dietrich <daniel.dietrich at okfn.org> wrote:
> I have used a personal contact for proof reading. However ePSIplatform has a contractor to do so. You can send the TR to her once ready.
> 
> Daniel
> 
> 
> On 23 Jul 2012, at 16:58, Antti Poikola wrote:
> 
> > I think I can... this day went with catching up with holiday emails, but tomorrow and wednesday are for the TR.
> >
> > I hope that Daniel could have a look at the draft also. (dropbox / epsi /deliverables /topic reports /work in progress)
> >
> > How is the english language editorial work? I know that my english is not quite enough to meet the EC standards.
> >
> > -Jogi
> >
> > On 23.7.2012 16:56, Tom Kronenburg wrote:
> >> Dear Antti,
> >>
> >> Do you think you can finish your topic report this week? That would be most welcome!
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> >> Kind regards, Tom
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> <Topic_report_local_and_regional_data.pdf>