[epsi-coord] Fwd: finale versie van de tekst

Wed Oct 24 08:25:12 BST 2012

Beste Marc,

Bedankt voor de feedback, we kunnen hier zeker mee verder. Vanavond krijg je een nieuwe versie. Tot dan!

Met vriendelijke groet,
Miet

Op 24-okt.-2012 om 08:43 heeft Marc de Vries <operationpettycoat at gmail.com> het volgende geschreven:

> Beste Miet,
> 
> Hierbij de commentaren van het team. Wellicht komen er nog 1 of 2 bij.
> 
> Kan je hiermee uit de voeten? Kijk vooral ook naar Ton Zijlstra's opmerkingen over format en gebruik. Als je daarover vragen hebt, kan je direct met Ton communiceren, ik op Cc svp.
> 
> Wanneer krijgen we de volgende versie?
> 
> Vrgr. Marc
> 
> 
> Begin doorgestuurd bericht:
> 
>> Van: Ton Zijlstra <ton.zijlstra at gmail.com>
>> Datum: 24 oktober 2012 08:32:13 CEST
>> Aan: epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
>> Onderwerp: Antw.: [epsi-coord] Fwd: finale versie van de tekst
>> Antwoord aan: epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org
>> Hi Marc, all,
>> 
>> I like the imagery, retro style and all. If I read your e-mails with Miet correctly, if we agree on the style / imagery, she will start adding in the texts and context that Tom is rightly missing, correct?
>> I would also suggest we prepare/keep the full text version you drafted as a separate document. 
>> 
>> As to how we would use this, and therefore what type of format / size:
>> 
>> Uses I foresee:
>> 1) As a slide deck, so we can publish it as a sharable pdf / .odp / .key / .ppt
>> 2) As images (.png, .jpg or such) we can put on flickr.com/photos/epsiplatform at full size so others could download them there, as well as to use in various postings on our site (then the max width would be some 550px)
>> 3) As 1 graphic which we can embed in our website at epsiplatform.eu/transport (this could well be either the .jpg or the slide deck.)
>> 
>> What I think we're aiming for is 1 sharable version in document form, and at least the overview image also as a sharable .jpg or such. Which we can use to illustrate other postings.
>> This probably puts the max size at a good resolution presentation slide, and then details as subsequent 'pages'.
>> 
>> To me this means we're not aiming for something like this (great to embed, hard to use in presentations e.g.) http://www.guykawasaki.com/enchantment/infographic/
>> as that is too long/high. 
>> 
>> Hope that's clear to Miet, otherwise happy to talk to her, if she has more specific restrictions/options in mind that she needs to move forward.
>> 
>> best,
>> 
>> Ton
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>> On Wed, Oct 24, 2012 at 8:16 AM, Tom Kronenburg <T.Kronenburg at pblq.nl> wrote:
>>> I'd have to say, I like the imagery. 
>>> 
>>> What I miss though, is a bit of context. 
>>> What is the manifesto? 
>>> For whom, by whom? 
>>> What's our clear message? I like the first part of the 'storyline', but I don't know what is meant by backwards/forwards? Also, point 5, what is it about?
>>> I think there should be a bit more text in the final poster. This text is really what the manifesto is about, so I'd say that in some way or another, the (abridged or full) text of the manifesto should be incorporated. 
>>> 
>>> Tom
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>>> Van: Marc de Vries <operationpettycoat at gmail.com>
>>> Beantwoorden - Aan: "epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org" <epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org>
>>> Datum: Wed, 24 Oct 2012 08:00:56 +0200
>>> Aan: "epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org" <epsi-coord at lists.okfn.org>
>>> Onderwerp: [epsi-coord] Fwd: finale versie van de tekst
>>> 
>>> ar all,
>>> 
>>> I would appreciate your comments on the first drafts of the visualisation of the Helsinki Manifesto, preferably by tonight.
>>> 
>>> Please be as specific as possible, taking account of the accompanying email of the visualizer below.
>>> 
>>> @ton, what size and format are we looking for?
>>> 
>>> Reg. Marc
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