[iRail] first alpha homepage design

[Yeri Tiete]

Heya,

Pretty good first version

Couple of remarks;

- "The best mobile mobile application for Belgian rail(road?) users
=> scrap "ever"
=> scrap "the"
=> make sure it's on one line

Btw, Christophe, what about NeTrains ? ;) We get a different domain name ?

- I wouldn't put the donate button on the front page. Seems a bit like we're desperately in need for $$$.

- The top and bottom bar, seems very Windows 95. Make the colour fading more fluid? 

- B-rail logo with a line through it is awesome! :p

- We'll have Bada and Windows Phone 7 as platform as well

- slide show seems like a good idea; make sure stations are in french on one screenshot, and in dutch on a different one (yes, people tend to nag about language)

- keep it KISS (simple!)

- I'll let the rest of the list comment and more :)

- I wouldn't say "the application is always in development blabla", they'll notice is. Seems a bit like we have buggy software all the time... ;) Just remove that line :)

- You should mention iRail somewhere on that page

Cheers for the good work :)

Have a nice weekend !

--
Kind regards,
Yeri Tiete
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www.yeri.be
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On 27 Nov 2010, at 21:28, Julien Winant wrote:

> Hello everybody
> 
> I designed the first version of the homepage.
> http://www.harkor.be/betrains/
> 
> First: What do you think? ;-)
> 
> Second: You can view the Nexus One on the homepage, my idea is making a slideshow with fades. We can have for example every 10seconds an iphone and after a nokia or wathever for the user understand that's a multi-platform application ans that's important.
> 
> Tirth: I taked the texts and elements on the homepage. If you want anymore, no problem, telle me what do you want.
> 
> Fourth: I hesitated put the fourth platforms on the menu.
> 
> Don't hesitate to comment bad or good things ;-)
> 
> Good night =)
> 
> -- 
> Julien Winant
> www.harkor.be
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