[open-science] Fwd: Chemistry Phase II Year 1 Report

[Marcus D. Hanwell]

Will,

Just to confirm I just merged in Katie's edits, and pushed them to the
git repository. Mainly spelling/grammar fixes. Look forward to seeing
your changes.

Marcus

On Tue, Nov 13, 2012 at 7:59 AM, Marcus D. Hanwell
<marcus.hanwell at kitware.com> wrote:
> Hi Will,
>
> Please feel free to edit the document, I am more than happy to look
> through the diff when you are done. Katie added a new version that I
> assume has her edits, and I will see if I can merge it quickly before
> leaving (she did it in Dropbox).
>
> I thought it was a useful mid-stage document to have, and really
> appreciate your feedback. I agree on the conclusions - I wandered more
> than I intended to there and was going to take a second look to cut it
> down. If you see a good way to summarize please do.
>
> I am at the expo for most of the day, but should have time to make a
> few changes. It would be good to submit this for approval
> today/tomorrow once it looks about right.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Marcus
>
> On Tue, Nov 13, 2012 at 5:12 AM, Will Schroeder
> <will.schroeder at kitware.com> wrote:
>> Marcus-
>>
>> Very nice, probably more than what's expected but it's a good document to
>> have.
>>
>> Do you want me to directly edit the document? I see some room for (minor)
>> improvement. For example, I have a pet peeve about using the word "allow"
>> and this document is rife with it :-)
>>
>> Also a couple of nits, for example the caption in Figure 5 seems to be
>> amiss, the reference to Figure 8 on page 12 is missing a closing paren, etc.
>>
>> A brief conclusion section would be nice too, just reminding the reader of
>> the work to be done in the coming year, and any challenges, etc.
>>
>> I'll be in today and we can talk some more.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Will
>>
>>
>> On Mon, Nov 12, 2012 at 9:18 AM, Marcus D. Hanwell
>> <marcus.hanwell at kitware.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi Will,
>>>
>>> This is totally optional, but if you get a change the Phase II year 1
>>> report is,
>>>
>>> http://kwsource.kitwarein.com/proposals/chemistry-vis-sbir
>>>
>>> I attach the PDF of it. I still need to add a little more for
>>> Avogadro/conclusions and will be out there a week today (Nov 19) to
>>> present end of year 1 progress.
>>>
>>> Any tips before I submit this would be appreciated if you have a
>>> little time, most other people are at Supercomputing but Katie S. is
>>> checking grammar etc.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> Marcus
>>> --
>>> Marcus D. Hanwell, Ph.D.
>>> Technical Leader, Kitware Inc.
>>> (518) 881-4937
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> William J. Schroeder, PhD
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